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Thursday, May 26, 2011

Semester Test

                It was the strangest thing I had ever seen, with tubes and wires sprouting in all directions. “Isn’t it beautiful,” my father whispered intensely.
                “Um,” I muttered leaning carefully over the railing. I couldn’t find the words to describe the thing in front of me; it was the strangest thing I had ever seen, with tubes and wires sprouting in all directions with a sort of electrical pulse running through the middle of it.
                He ignored my uncomfort and continued on about his achievement. “So many years of work and struggle and it is finally done! Oh Claire, this will fix everything. I’ll have everything I want now!”
                “Daddy I don’t know about this.” Something sparked out to the side and cracked as it hit the metal fence standing between myself and the machine. I flinched backwards as my heart flew. “It kind of looks  . . . dangerous.”
                “Dangerous,” he questioned looking down at me confused. He was so tall, it scared me at times just how menacing he seemed without trying.
                I flushed awkwardly, I was risky business doubting Daddy’s inventions. “I just meant that it looks like it’s as powerful as a bomb.” That was a lie. The contraption before me was like nothing on this Earth, it was in its own category of terrifying and insane. It was the strangest thing I had ever seen, with tubes and wires sprouting in all directions with a sort of electrical pulse running through the middle of it. Something above the device whirled at a speed I could fathom, so fast that it was picking up little bits of torn paper out of the air and swirling them in its own little orbit.
                My father chuckled, “No, no, silly Claire, it’s not that powerful.” I sighed relieved, the bulking machine’s appearance was just misleading. “It is infinitely MORE powerful than any bomb.” His smile was ecstatic as he took the stairs two at a time down toward the machine.
                “Daddy, no! What are you doing?”
                “Testing the child of my ingenious loin!” He laughed like a mad-man. That statement sounded infinitely correct. The machine was his child, not me. I was a mistake, a glitch in his circuit of life. That terrible, awful machine that was the strangest thing I had ever seen, with tubes and wires sprouting in all directions with a sort of electrical pulse running through the middle of it. That machine with something above the device whirling at a speed I couldn’t fathom, so fast that it was picking up little bits of torn paper out of the air and swirling them in its own little orbit, with pointy arms of steel spitting out of the sides creating a never ending chain on electrical current flowing through the crackling center. His newest creation was his child, not me.
                “What do you mean testing? You just finished it. Shouldn’t you check it over another time or something?”
                “You sound scared Claire. Don’t you trust my calculations?” My father looked wild, a cliché mad scientist. His stained white lab coat flapping in the breeze, his hair whipping in all directions, a huge grin upon his lips, eyes bulging with anticipation, and a stance of sheer unfaltering determination.
                “Of course I do.” A horrible lie that most days Daddy would have seen right through, but not today. There were more important things on his mind than my petty lie.
                He darted to a control panel and began flipping switches and typing in codes. Dear God, he was actually going to try to do it. “Daddy wait!” He snapped a furious glare at the interruption. “Maybe you should try it out on something else before the big experiment.”
                “I’ve waited thirteen years! Why should I wait any longer?” The bags under his under rested eyes made him look older than usual in the dim light and his fury more obvious. The machine sent an enormous bolt of electricity in my direction as if in its own fury. I dove to the ground and tried to convince air to refill my lungs. It was the strangest thing I had ever seen, with tubes and wires sprouting in all directions with a sort of electrical pulse running through the middle of it. Something above the device whirled at a speed I couldn’t fathom, so fast that it was picking up little bits of torn paper out of the air and swirling them in its own little orbit, with pointy arms of steel spitting out of the sides creating a never ending chain on electrical current flowing through the crackling center. The sounds it made were enough to drive a person into the asylum. So loud and sudden and fierce it made my stomach churn.
                “Give me one good reason to wait,” my father growled.
I swallowed hard. “Because you loved her. If you want this to go right you should try it on something else first. You would never forgive yourself if you let this machine loose and ruined your chances of ever getting Mom back.”
Daddy suddenly looked blank and calm, like I used to know him. “Your mother, Beatrice.” For what seemed like hours he stood still and silent.
The resurrection machine attacked me again. “Please,” I called desperately at my frozen father.
He blinked twice and nodded, “Yes. A very good thought Claire. I’ll try it on something else first.”
I sighed easily as he went back to the mainframe and switched enough dials that the apparatus stopped acting quite so violently. “Good,” I called down to him. “We’ll turn it off for now and find something else to test it out on a bit later.”
“Now,” he yelled back. “We try it out now.”
“What?!” No, no, no, please no.
He darted into the closet next to him and a horrendous stench followed him back out. My father had two dead animals in each hand. A dog, a pig, a cat and a small beaver. “No,” I whispered. The thought of his collection of departed organisms nearly made me hurl. “You’re sick.” I know he heard me that time, he glanced at me for a split moment then tossed the animals towards a marked spot on the base of the machine.
“Here we go.” It took all his strength to pull the switch. Everything went to bright to see as the electric current hit a new high and blasted out in the lab, small fires started on my father’s notes. I couldn’t breathe in terror yet again. Four small animals ran around under me.
My father made a triumphant noise and leapt into the air. “It worked! I can bring Beatrice back!”
“NO!” This was wrong. I missed Mom terribly, but this was wrong.
He ignored me and reset all the dials and knobs to the massively powerful setting he had the set at before, the ones that were supposed to bring my Mom back to life. I got shakily up and stood watching frantically over the barrier between me and magic. Something smacked me in the head and I fell back wards. I recognized Mom’s coffin in front of me being lowered from the ceiling. “Watch it,” he barked at me watching the descent of my Mom, like bringing her back from heaven. It was then I realized my father was not really my father, just another man.
                As soon as Mom was in her spot Frank yanked the switched the crank. Another bright flash. Frank ran to the casket just as a hand grabbed the side of it from the inside. It had worked. I threw up until I dry heaved. Not right. My former parents embraced and cried. My mother looked up at me and smiled. My eyes unfocused as if I was going to pass out. Then, suddenly, an earth shattering noise. The machine. Something fell off the side, then a spike got sucked into the whirling and flew at the wall embedding itself. It was falling apart. The two adults below me tried to run but . . .

It was the strangest thing I had ever seen, with tubes and wires sprouting in all directions with a sort of electrical pulse running through the middle of it. Something above the device whirled at a speed I couldn’t fathom, so fast that it was picking up little bits of torn paper out of the air and swirling them in its own little orbit, with pointy arms of steel spitting out of the sides creating a never ending chain on electrical current flowing through the crackling center. The sounds it made were enough to drive a person into the asylum. So loud and sudden and fierce it made my stomach churn.  It was the machine that killed my parents just after making them both seem alive again.

Friday, May 20, 2011

Bobbi Story Start

"Get out of there as fast as you can!" I yelled to my brother as the phone began to cut out.
"Thank you captain obvious, I'm tryin' to do just that."
"Don't you mouth off at me!"
"Stop telling me what to do!"
"Do what you're supposed to the first time and I won't have to."
"Whatever," he hissed automatically.
"Just hurry up," I begged.
"Is that concern I hear," he asked smugly.
"Yeah," I snapped back, "because if something happens to you, it's my butt."
"Chill, I'm just about out."
"Good. But don't let your gaurd down."
"I'm practically home free."
"Practically are safe are not the smae thing, Lawerence."
"How many times are you going to tell me that?"
"Until you realize it," I stated determined.
"Right . . . So forever?"
"If that's what it takes." My brother was about all I had left, I wouldn't let his own idioacracy get the better of him. Not on my watch.
"I'll be back soon so stop worrying your little head about it."
"Fine, but make it snappy."
"Yes, ma'am!" His voice was all sarcasm, he would never take my orders seriously. "Be there in just a- AHH!"
My heart stopped beating, I knew my brother's pain noise and I knew it well. "Lawerence?" All asorts of strange noises came through the phone. "Lawerence!?"
"Back off," I bearly heard him yell before shots rang out. Lots of shots.
"Lawerence!!!" I sprinted from the car as the shots continued, but my brother's voice didn't. Somehow I managed to scramble up to the high window and pull out my gun. Lawerence was down there and bleeding out his side, sure he was still standing and moving away, but he wouldn't make it out . . .
I couldn't finish that thought, not now. One by one I popped off every person in my sight while battling the tear flooding my eyes. "Come on Louie . . ." The other side's men were turning back, reluctant to leave their intruder alive. He made it to the door and I leapt down to the ground, norrowly avoiding breaking the leg. "Lawerence, Louie, sre you okay?"
He leaned into me, which could only mean it was bad. "I'm fine," he lied.
"Let's get you the hell out of here." He nodded. The car sped away at massive speeds. His face was becoming more and more pale as we drove, I called in the incident and they promised to have medics right at the metal gates for us. "You're going to be fine," I whispered, more for reassuring myself than him.
"I've had worse," is all he said leaning back and wincing a bit.
"I'm so sorry Louie."
"Why," he siad glancing at his side and staring. I had to force my eyes from following his.
"We shouldn't have done that. We should have waited for others to come and give us a hand."
"I insisted. Nothing you could have done about. I was the stupid one here. Don't worry about it."
"No, I should have insisted. I just let you go in there alone."
"Emmy you know better than anyone I'm stubborn. Just let it go, I would have marched in there no matter if you had agreed or not. And you didn't agree, you fought hard to not let me go in threre, but I pestered you into it." I shook my head. "Em, please, stop blaming yourself. It's not like you got me shot. I got me shot."
"But-"
"Enough," he said forcefuly. Lawerence coughed and hacked leaving a trial of blood coming from his mouth and a small pool on his leg. "Shit," he muttered before swaying into the window.
"Laerence? Lou? Come on, stay with me."

But he was out. Later I would find out that he died there in the car. Right next to me. My brother died because I made I didn't have the strenght to say no and demand a change of plans for the safety of my only family. Since then I've moved into the ranks above me, taking my borther's place then surpassing it. I hear people whispereing and muttereing about why I'm so harsh and strict now, why even my superiors will accept my courses of action when it was not as ordered so easily. None of them have it right. They say I'm dark and cruel, that I don't care about procedure or life anymore. But it's just the opposite. I don't leave people behind. I force my opinion to happen because I care. But no one will understand that.